Mr. Chocolate

2008-10-11 小精灵儿童网站作者：姜小蒙 | Chocolate 小蒙拟人

　　100字作文：Mr. Chocolate

　　Hi, I`m Mr. Chocolate. Do you like me? I usually wear a black and white dress. Look at me, am I beautiful? I`m very sweet, so many children like me. I hope we can become good frends! Oh, it`s time to go to school.I must go. Goodbye!

　　六（3）姜小蒙

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《Mr. Chocolate》摘要：nd white dress. Look at me, am I beautiful? I`m very sweet, so many children like me. I hope we can become good frends! Oh, it`s time to go to school.I must go. Goodbye! 六3姜小蒙 Mr. Guo点评：本篇文...

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